T1+Persuade

__Monday 14th March__

====Last Friday we had an extended morning tea. I believe should continue having an extended morning tea every Friday.You would also like to have a bit more morning tea wouldn’t you? If you continue kids will keep getting back to class fast. Teachers will also ====

====I believe we should do this because it would help kids that don’t usually get back to class quickly, they could start gettingback to class quicker.So if every one does get back to class they can work more and as a reward we could have this idea on the Friday. ====

====I believe along with everyone else that this is a good idea to extend the Friday morning tea. This is not just for kids but it would also help the teacher.Teachers would have more time to relax, mark or plan some work. If teachers get more relaxing time or working then they will be happier to the kids. ====

====If kids get more time at morning tea then they will get more fresh air. If kids get more fresh air then they can work better so they get better marks and it will give the school a better reputation. When kids get more air they also get more exercise and the will focus better. ====

====So I believe it will be better for every one and. I know that all of the above will be done if we have an extended morning. ====

__Tuesday 29th March__

L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can


 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics

New Zealand should not have a Nuclear Power factory

Not to long ago the whole world saw that Japan’s nuclear power factory had a melt down. Would you like to die a painful and a unpleasant death just for walking outside? If a nuclear power factory had a leak there is a high chance of this happening. Nuclear power has toxic waste, can cause cancer and during a natural disaster can go into melt down. New Zealand should not have nuclear power factory

Nuclear power effects the environment because it seeps through the ground and water.The radioactive waste can go in the air and can kill you. If you get a little bit of the stuff in your body you will get cancer. This radioactive waste will kill green houses and lower our food supply. It can even get into animals and kill you by been near the animal.

If you get anywhere near the nuclear power waste you will get cancer. This cancer is not at all good. It will be a miracle to survive it. This cancer will not just kill you but it will be painful. You would not want that would you? You can get radiation by the x rays, ELF radiation and gamma rays and more. The cancer you can get is not just Cancer but you could get it in lung cancer, Stomach cancer, Multiple myeloma, Thyroid cancer and Breast cancer.

People may say this way of getting recourse is a brilliant idea but really it is really bad.It may be good for the mean time but if there was to be a big earthquake or a tsunami like Japan there will be a massive melt down. Yes it would be cheaper but when it goes wrong it goes really wrong. Natural disasters can be fatal not only will it take out heaps of houses of buildings, it will cause a nuclear meltdown.You have seen in Fukushima that we will regret have nuclear power.

So i’m sure you do not want a nuclear melt down and all of the other disasters that could happen. So I hope you have been convinced to stay against nuclear power.

